Calling all Writers! Join me on a Shakespearean Excursion: “Now is the winter of our discontent made glorious summer by our sun of York.” opening lines of Richard III

Background

Despite my efforts to be creative in promoting the book, I have been discontented these past months with the modest sales of We Ran Away to Sea.  I recently contracted someone in Poland to analyze my efforts with Amazon ads, upon which I’ve been spending an inordinate amount of time and money with mediocre results.  I enjoy the creative aspects of promotion, but not the nitty-gritty details or keeping track.

This morning, a serendipitous detour led to some unexpected pleasures as I reflected upon “Now is the winter of our discontent, made glorious summer by our sun of York,” the brilliant opening lines of Shakespeare’s Richard III. The link below provides an excellent analysis of the entire passage and concludes with a fabulous video of Laurence Olivier delivering the soliloquy.

https://nosweatshakespeare.com/quotes/soliloquies/now-is-the-winter-of-our-discontent

My Polish Mentor

My Polish mentor suggested that the blurb which I revised several times with the dubious “help” of ChatGPT was more a synopsis than an invitation to read the book. So, I tackled revising the blurb, and I invite your suggestions and comments. I uploaded the revised blurb for both the ebook and the paperback onto Amazon last night, but I’m not satisfied with either. This morning, I wrote the following shortened version with no use of AI.

So, channeling Shakespeare again, Ladies and Gentlemen, please “lend me your ears” (Julius Caesar) and your advice.

(1) Revision March 22 (morning)

Frustrated and unhappy with their comfortable lives in mid-America, Kent and Pam sell the family home and all their possessions and run away to live on a sailboat. With no experience of the sea or sailing, they fly to England with their children in search of an affordable boat. Their first sail is across the Atlantic. In the days before GPS, they rely on celestial navigation to get them to the Caribbean. Are they crazy, brave, foolish, or all three? Would you or wouldn’t you do what they did? Told in two voices from different perspectives, Pam and Kent’s accounts of their lives at sea and at home will give you much to think about.

Run away with Pam and Kent and explore the unknown with them and within yourself.

 Or should the opening (continuing the Shakespeare allusion) be: “Discontented with their comfortable lives…”?

(2) Current Kindle version (as of March 22)

Would you voluntarily give up your secure, comfortable life for the unknown?

When Pam and Kent make the audacious decision to sell their house and everything in it and embrace life at sea, they envision a harmonious existence on their sailboat, filled with adventure and togetherness. However, their dreams shatter early on when Pam and the children abandon Kent and their boat in Europe, leaving him disheartened and adrift. Undeterred, he embarks on a solitary journey through the equinoctial gales of the Bay of Biscay, accompanied by a hired crew. Weeks later, Pam has a change of heart and joins him with their ten-year-old son in the Canary Islands for the Atlantic crossing. Using celestial navigation in the days before GPS, they arrive in Antigua as planned. But little do they know that the challenges of their chosen new life are just beginning.

Pam’s vivid letters and Kent’s heartfelt stories document the grand experiment of their years at sea, their risky overland travels, and the struggles that threaten to pull them apart but bring them closer together. The book contains maps, photos, a timeline, and a glossary.

(3) Current Amazon paperback version (as of March 22)

Would you voluntarily relinquish your comfortable life and worldly goods and set out for the unknown?

When Pam and Kent decide to sell their house and embrace a life at sea, they envision a harmonious existence on their sailboat, filled with adventure and togetherness. However, their dreams shatter when Pam and the children abandon Kent and their boat in Europe, leaving him disheartened and adrift. Undeterred, he embarks on a solitary journey through the equinoctial gales of the Bay of Biscay, accompanied by a hired crew. Weeks later, Pam has a change of heart and she and ten-year-old Andy join him in the Canary Islands for the Atlantic crossing. Using celestial navigation in those days before GPS, they reach the Caribbean. Yet, their challenges are just beginning.

Although Kent yearns to sail through the Panama Canal and explore the vast Pacific, Pam harbors deep-seated fears, and fourteen-year-old Jake, who has reluctantly joined them in the Virgin Islands, craves the familiarity of friends back home. Despite memorable family adventures, Kent reluctantly relinquishes his cherished dream.

Nearly a decade later, Pam and Kent sell their home and possessions again, this time venturing through the Great Lakes into the North Atlantic, through the Bahamas to the Caribbean. For over six years, they travel to offbeat destinations and undertake daring overland journeys through Central America, Venezuela, and Colombia—a country then known for its perilous reputation. Kent remains steadfast in his desire to traverse the Panama Canal and sail the Pacific, but equipment failures, storms, illness, financial worries, and family complications often interrupt their idyllic moments.

Will Pam succumb to her fears, or will Kent embark on his grand voyage alone? Share their journey and the difficult, sometimes heart-wrenching decisions involved in living at sea.

So that’s it! Which of these versions or variations of them would entice you to read the book? What would Shakespeare write? Comments?

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Book Signings, Readings, and Reviews

Kent reading We Ran Away to Sea

Kent reading in downtown Albuquerque

Join us at Treasure House Books and Gifts in Old Town this Sunday, September 10, from 1:30-3:30 p.m. for a book talk, reading, and conversation. Come and go as you please since the space is small. Books will be available for sale.

We hope to have future events for those who cannot make this one.

In the News!

We were happy to see David Steinberg’s “Book of the Week” article based on his thoughtful reading of We Ran Away to Sea and several phone conversations over the past couple of weeks. We were pleasantly surprised to be chosen as the Book of the Week, given the presence of several much-published and well-known authors at events this week. The link to the Albuquerque Journal article is below.

Setting Sail: Memoir offers an intimate look at one couple’s life on the seas

Report on the Travel Bug Presentation on August 26

Unfortunately, we forgot to ask someone to take pictures of the talk and reading at the Travel Bug in Santa Fe last week that was attended by twenty enthusiastic people. The presentation shared by Kent and Linnea was accompanied by a slide show with a few special effects. We won’t be able to show the slides this week, but we hope to find another venue where we can repeat this performance.

Thanks for Your Support

We appreciate all of your support for this project that, like the Covid pandemic that accompanied it, often seemed to have no end. Please think about writing a few words on Amazon about your response to the book. Ask about the book at your local bookstores, and tell your friends about the book.

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Adventures in Book Marketing

First check ever from Organic Books in Albuquerque

We began our in-person efforts as novice book marketers this week. Many authors have told us that marketing a book is even harder than writing it. That hasn’t been true so far, but neither have we seen much in tangible results. We have promises, but we’re not counting our chickens before they’re hatched.

Writing a press release took an unbelievable amount of time. I finally resorted to ordering Sandra Beckwith’s book on Kindle, which arrived in minutes and proved very helpful in an easy-to-follow-straightford way. (Get Your Book in the News). I’d looked at several online sources and found them contradictory.

One hurdle was getting the book-cover image to show up in an email copied from a Word document without making it an attachment or a PDF, two things we’d been warned not to do. How hard could that be? Very hard, it turns out, but I think I’ve finally got it.

Next: what to do with the press release and how to get it to whom? We’re still taking baby steps on that. We were thrilled when veteran Albuquerque Journal writer David Steinberg agreed to take a look at the book. So, on a hot Tuesday afternoon, we found our way to his house. He had given us precise directions, and we should have found it easily, but I had transposed two numbers in the address and ended up running around in a confusing 3-way intersection on foot, seeking a house that Google Maps placed on an empty lot. Fortunately, I checked my email and found the correct address and David himself.

The next stop was Organic Books, a lovely small bookstore new to me. I had sent them a press release a day or two before but had no reply. When I later checked, I found the message marked “undeliverable.” I’d mistyped the address. That’s happened more than once! Reminder: take my time and double-check those addresses!

Kelly Brewer, the bookstore owner, welcomed us and asked Kent, “What’s your book about?” I left him to talk while I ran to the hot parking lot to get another copy. She said she’d take two and wrote a check on the spot. Our first in-person sale! She told Kent, “You need a little practice describing your book.” We’re now practicing and picking out passages to read for book talks.

On Wednesday, we gathered a stack of books with press releases tucked inside and headed to Santa Fe for our regular night at the opera. Our first stop was Bookworks in Albuquerque, our longtime favorite neighborhood bookstore. We offered to leave the book with a young person at the counter, who accepted it with indifference. But another fellow behind the counter observed the interaction and grabbed the book. “This looks great!” he said, apparently judging the book by its title and cover. It turned out he’s a sailor — and he’s promised to read it!

Our second stop was the Travel Bug on Paseo de Peralta in Santa Fe. I remembered being impressed with its great selection of travel books and supplies. Again, we were warmly welcomed, but this shop did not want a printed press release or a copy of the book but wanted us to send it electronically. We enjoyed looking around the store and chatting with a friendly customer who knew someone who built boats in Norway. She was drinking a yummy-looking cold drink — a mocha smoothie –, and before we left, Kent and I shared a large one, purchased a book, and got walking directions to Collected Works Bookstore.

Collected Works also declined to take a copy of the book or press release and handed us directions to email the store owner and the event coordinator. We’ve since been invited to give them two books they will sell on a commission basis. We haven’t pursued scheduling an event yet, but we are scheduled for a presentation at the Travel Bug on Saturday, August 26, a5 5 pm. We’ll let our Santa Fe friends know! We also have an event scheduled for Treasure House Books in Albuquerque’s Old Town on Sunday, September 10, 1:30-3:30 pm.

The next dilemma is the mailing list. You may receive an email from Jacanapress@gmail.com shortly, asking if you’d like to continue to get emails from us — we may end up in your spam box. Someone has told us they “strongly discourage” using a “free email” that ends in Google.com, but hey, at the moment, we’re just trying to get the word out about ONE book and hope we’ll find some readers who will find it worth reading and pass the word on to friends, local bookstores, and libraries.

A final story: Kent’s nephew, who is a much more famous Kent Kedl, was flying back to his home in Shanghai from a visit with family and wrote to Kent:

Unc Kent,

I was in the US for a few weeks and spent time in Minneapolis … where I was handed a copy of your book. I read it on the flight back to China … and it’s REALLY good! I had really only heard of your adventures secondhand from Mom and Dad, but reading about it directly from you and Pam was amazing. I’d always loved talking with Pam because she was so well-read, articulate, and acerbically funny, but I never knew what a great writer she was. It’s so good that you could retrieve those letters.

Thanks again for a great read!

(the other) Kent

In a second email, he said, “A flight attendant asked what I was reading, and I told her the background. She thought it was interesting and took a picture of the cover to order it!”

So, the book is gradually making its way into the world. Subscribe to our blog to receive notices when we update our adventures in book marketing and share other news relating to We Ran Away to Sea.

Press Release

For immediate release, 30 July 2023

Contact: George Kent Kedl & Linnea Hendrickson, jacanapress@gmail.com

Kent: 505-440-3334, Linnea: 505-977-5811, 1312 Los Arboles Ave. NW, Albuquerque, NM 87107

Land-locked Albuquerque Sailor Launches a Gripping Memoir

 of his Eight Years on a Sailboat

Albuquerque, New Mexico, 17 July 2023 — Philosophy professor and sailor-turned-author Kent Kedl brought 100 typewriters and a dinghy with a sail with him when he moved to Albuquerque twelve years ago following the death of his sailor wife and co-author Pamela Thompson Kedl. His second wife, Linnea Hendrickson, pushed him to collect Pam’s letters and his stories (“Yes! Other people will want to read this!”) and turn them into a book, so We Ran Away to Sea: A Memoir and Letters became a Covid project that out-lasted the pandemic. 

Book Description: “If I don’t get away from here, I think I’ll die,” Kent announced to his shocked wife Pam in the early 1980s. We Ran Away to Sea tells how two Midwesterners with no experience of the sea or sailing gave up their careers and comfortable South Dakota home to sail with their children from England to the Caribbean, embarking on a multi-year quest for a simpler, more satisfying, and honest life.

Essentials: We Ran Away to Sea: A Memoir and Letters (ISBN: 979-8-9870097-0-3 paperback and 979-8-9870097-10 e-book) by George Kent Kedl and Pamela Thompson Kedl, published by Jacana Press, 2023. $16.99/$5.99, 352 pages,is available for purchase from local retail and online booksellers (including Amazon), through IngramSpark, and from the author. Contact information: Webpage: Jacanapress.com; Facebook: George Kent Kedl; Author Page: George Kent Kedl; jacanapress@gmail.com; 505-344-7650 (h); Linnea 505-977-5811or Kent 505-440-3334. Events 2023: Travel Bug, Santa Fe, 26 August, 5 pm; Treasure House Books, Albuquerque, 10 September, 1:30-3:30 pm.

Contact: Kent or Linnea at Jacanapress@gmail.com or via text or phone for review copies, book talks, signings, interviews, cover images, or more information.

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